Oh gosh . I totally relate to this. I have so many examples like these, not necessarily grammar, but when I change structure of writing or use surrealist methods, editors are constantly trying to edit me . They have good intention may be but what's the point of all this circus if you end up taking writer's voice. I do obviously get the editor's side to edit for perfection but that perfection these days is anyway guided by these apps and platform rules etc and so everything is just absurd at the end of it all. I think Medium especially is very narrow minded. People dont know how to engage in healthy debates and will just send nasty comments and block you if god forbid you take a slightly different stand. Tbh I come here only for 3-4 selected folks like you. Not a very healthy platform but I am trying to stay open minded.